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Comments: Great first game for the campaign. You've kept the module design clean and simple - a good idea for a purely tabletop style, DM'd adventure.
Since you're going with that style (which is a good choice), I'd suggest concentrating on building good NPC's, items, and areas as we go along. In particular, you might try adding some description texts on important NPC's and placeables/items - but perhaps that takes up too much prep time.